FxF Road to Hell is Paved by Good Intentions

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FxF Road to Hell is Paved by Good Intentions

Tajira

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Hello dear human,
I came up with this idea I´ve wanted to do for some time now but only now has it solidified into an actual character I would enjoy playing. It´s an exploration of a hero who turns into a villain through their unwavering dedication to help others...without ever stopping to ask what they would want in life. A brief history is a wishing gone wrong. In her youthful arrogance, Suria wanted to be the best, help everyone in need, be known across the whole continent and become the greatest hero of all times. She went as far as to seek out a rare and dangerous genie, who granted her three wishes ...

... be careful what you wish for ...
That´s what everyone told her but she did not listen.

She wished to be able to find the suffering and unjustly treated ones ... now that´s the only thing she hears most of the day, their constant screams ringing in her ears, pleading for her help.
Then she wished to be able to defeat every evil she encounters ... now a beast occupies her shadow, powerful yet repulsive that comes out to aid her in every battle
The third wish ... what do you think traveller, what more can a hero wish for?

She never stopped helping, only her methods became ... radical


how long is the f a l l. . .

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Suria the Blazing Heart
「 A B O U T 」
aliases: Monster of Baldevick, Su,
age: unknown, looks 28
species: human she was once, but now?
gender: female
role: hero villain
「 V I S A G E 」
height: 5' 11"
build: athletic with solid muscles
skin: numerous scars
hair: dark brown
eyes: light brown/golden
「 P S Y C H E 」
first impression: cold, confident, arrogant
talents: combat, intimidation, regeneration
likes: screams of slaughtered babies, warm blood of her victims
silence
hates: injustice, lies, criminals ... herself
♪♪ Close the doors, keep your voice down ♪♪
Is it yours, the sound of frantic beating heart?
Calm it quick, she has come to town.
The Monster of Baldevick, the Queen Without the Crown
rumors
Once a promising young hero, adorned by crowds and hosted in the courts across the continent, now a nightmarish monster that prowls the cities and slaughters without mercy. What could have happened that turned the tides? There are rumours of course. The rumours of who she is, rumours of who she was and the rumours of how she came to be. An orphan, an assassin, a devil´s spawn, a mistreated royal, a soldier, a beast born in the wilderness … every village has its own version as they compete to create the most interesting story and yet they all agree on one thing – cross her and you will die.
but
who believes rumors?
traits
To be added.
story
To be added.

. . . from the very t o p ?

Details are to be specified, this is just a rough draft that came out of my sudden bout of inspiration. I love a slow burn romance with a lot of angst, twists and turns and an equally dark world to match. Not sure if low or high fantasy would suit Suria better, but I will be glad for your input. The same goes for the story itself, perhaps there´s a way to counteract the wishes and YC could be the one helping Suria do that. Or maybe the plot will be about something completely different, no solid idea in mind just yet and I am open to your ideas. Also Suria´s monstrous form will highly depend on your preferences - we could go with just horns, talons and sharp teeth, maybe something like large scales forming makeshift swords behind her elbows ... or she can become a full-blown monster / dragon when enraged enough.

Anyway, open to your suggestions and ideas! Here´s my RT - link. with more information about me. The most important being
  • I only play FxF for the main characters (but I will help you populate the world with many many more side characters)
  • Love dark romance, character development and world-building
  • Novela-style but sometimes I make weird mistakes because English is not my first language (and I love reading longer posts)
If you have a completely different story idea I am happy to come up with another character or a story of my own. I just want to get back to writing.

Hope to hear from you soon!

Tajira
 
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