Challenge Submission A Break-Up in 2019 (CW: Language)

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Challenge Submission A Break-Up in 2019 (CW: Language)

Ruin

The Apocalyptic End
Inner Sanctum Nobility
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Today 4:11 PM
Messages
226
Age
33
~Wifey~
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9:45
rick im sorry. i was going to tell you.
i didn't want you to find out this
way.


9:49
You mean you didn't want me to
walk in on you while you fucking
my friend.


9:50
Whatever, Karen. Fuck whoever
you want to. I'm done with you.
And obviously you're done with
me.

10:01
can you blame me for doing it?
youre never home. and when
you do come home you dont
even pay attention to me. so
dont blame all of it on me!
youre just as much as to blame
for this. if you bothered to
actually spend time with me
instead of jerking off with your
jackass friends i wouldnt have
slept with james.

10:04
What?! You're kidding me! I
don't spend enough time with
you so that gives you a pass to
fuck one of those friend's that I
"jerk off" with in MY bed. Go
fuck yourself, Karen. Or better
yet, get James to do it.

10:06
i might as well. at least ill actually
get some satisfaction for a change.

10:09
btw that's OUR bed. just like its
OUR house and OUR car and OUR
kids. youre always so full of yourself.
you think that just because i can't
work right now that everything you
buy is yours and just yours. you have
a family rick. why dont you act like it
for once?


10:22
Fuck you. And there is no "ours"
anymore. You really think that I would
stay with you after I caught you with
another guy balls deep in you. You've got
to be psycho. I told you I'm done with you.
Expect a call from my lawyer soon.

10:25
so thats it? we're done then? you don't
want to try to talk this out?

10:42
rick?

11:10
god dammit rick. answer me.

1:32
fine. fuck it. i guess we're over with over
with. i hope you have a great fucking life.
maybe you wont make your next wife as
miserable as you made me.

4:11
My lawyer has informed me that I should
only communicate to you through him now.
Goodbye, Karen. Have a nice life.


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So this was something that was very different than what I would normally do. Typically, I would give a narrative, but I kinda thought about it for a little while, and this was the realest thing that came to mind. It's 2019. We're in the Information Era--the Digital Age! So little is done face-to-face anymore. So I wanted to convey that lack of intimacy by telling the story through "text messages". I hope everyone enjoyed it! Excuse the language! I was trying to go for realism.
 
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