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Okay, so I'm right in the beginning/middle stages of plotting a story and I believe it would be the perfect timing to bring in a writing partner to help me sort out all the finer details, sub-plots and such. I have everything for it on a different website, which i would be willing to let my partner have the log-in information for, temporarily, while we plot and discuss it further. But we will be writing on here.
Romance will be the genre of the day for this one. I haven't written any sexual encounters before but I'm fairly confident in my ability to do so. But it's definitely story over smut for me and i would appreciate it if we agree on that. If we don't vibe well as far as writing i will let you know and i hope you do the same if you aren't feeling it. Open communication is big for me as well as my writing partner being understanding. I will show you the same courtesy of course :) I can't give a specific time schedule as far as writing since i have three kids and one is a nine month old who just started walking so my days can be very busy at times.
I write between two to six paragraphs, just kind of depending on the scene and my writing partner. I would like at least two paragraphs at minimum, however for the sexual parts one paragraph will do just fine. I ask that those intimate scenes are classy and not trashy please. Good grammar is a big plus but typos are expected as everyone has them.
Oh, a really huge thing for me is I need someone who can write side characters with almost as much, if not exactly as much, depth as your main character.I think that's about it as far as what i'm looking for. I'm okay with discussing plot changes usually but i will have to ask that the main plot line stays the way it is but that doesn't mean i'm not open to suggestions if you have any. One other thing, this story line consists of two main girl characters so i will be looking for you to write two main guy characters. The two guys are best friends who jointly own a ranch where they live with a few other buddies, all of whom were part of the same special forces group. I gave them names(Tyler and Kaden) for the sake of making this easier but you can obviously change them if you want. I am looking for certain personality traits in Tyler and Kaden but it's not a whole bunch.
Tyler handled the combat better than most and while he can be pretty serious a lot, he doesn't mind goofing off with the guys or showing his feelings for his girl around other people. He's more of an alpha type but doesn't mind letting his woman lead the way, since he has full confidence in her abilities, as long as he can be right next to her to keep her safe.
Kaden handled the combat okay but he internalizes most of it and doesn't talk about what happened. A lot of people are intimidated by his presence because he's a lot stronger than he shows. He's not as good with his feelings as Tyler is but will make damn sure everyone knows that she is his. He is calloused a lot but has a soft spot for his girl. At first he seems a bit cold towards her but it's only because she scares him in a way. He doesn't believe in soul mates but something about her just makes him come undone. He has more of a Beta personality but it's simply because he's okay with not being totally in charge and he wont take shit from someone just because they're higher ranked than him.
Let me just introduce all the characters that will be important to this plot run-down:
Kilani: Older sister, Tyler's soul mate
Nesryn: Younger sister, Kaden's soul mate
Yuri: Antagonist, unhealthy obsession with Kilani, boss of an underground sex ring where the rich and powerful clientele has a penchant for torture, rape, and sometimes murder
(This is a werewolf thing. The kind that can change into full wolves and full humans)
Onto the plot information! I'm just going to give you a quick run down and if you wish to further delve into the story with me then we can discuss everything else.
When Nesryn goes on a road trip with a group of her friends, she catches a scent too intoxicating to ignore. Promising to meet up with them later, she separates and begins to track the person the scent belongs to. As she turns a corner, she sees a small group of men exiting the feed store across the road and she immediately is drawn to Kaden. Before she can cross the road to find out what was so interesting about him, Yuri grabs her from behind and drags her back into an alleyway, covering her mouth with a rag to muffle any screams. Taking her back to his mansion several hours away, he chains her to the cold, wet stone floor of a cell beneath his house and strips her of her clothing to make her suffer. It takes almost five years of being raped, starved, beaten, and tortured before she is rescued.
After Nesryn doesnt call or return to her friends, they call Kilani and inform her shes missing. Dropping everything, Kilani seeks the help of her Uncle and they look for three years before he finally stops to return back to the pack. Kilani continues the search for another year before she finally gets a solid lead that puts her right in Yuri's path. One night after Kilani leaves a small run down cafe in the outskirts of a small town close to Yuri's home, she's grabbed by three men and thrown into a van where they hit her over the head to knock her out.
When she regains consciousness, Kilani is shocked to see who she thought was an old family friend. Yuri Savage. After Kilani had refused his advances over the many years, he had decided to take a much more drastic approach. Kilani is trapped there for six months, every day getting raped and sometimes beaten because she wouldn't comply until he threatened to further cause Nesryn more harm.
Almost a full six months after he captured her, Kilani is allowed a couple hours of freedom a day outside as long as she has several men watching her. Preparing herself she saves all the strength she can and even allows Yuri to do as he pleases for a couple of days so she will be healed enough to escape. Once she sees her chance, she escapes, having realized that as long as she can go get help, Nesryn has an actual chance.
Unknowingly, Kilani passes onto Tyler and Kaden's land after traveling a full day and finds a safe place in the nearby woods to hole up for a few hours. She doesnt even get to sleep when she hears the sound of two men voices and immediately bolts, fear making her think it's Yuri or his men. But in her weakened state she doesn't get far before Tyler's men catch up to her. As they try to calm her down, Kilani goes on the offensive and gets in a couple good hits before they subdue her and she stops struggling from exhaustion. She passes out asleep in the truck on the way back to the house.
Upon arriving at Tyler's house they take her inside and Tyler finds out shes his soul mate. Once she wakes up almost a full two days later, Kilani gets her bearings and is relieved to find she's in a safe place but wont calm down because of Nesryn's predicament. Asking for their help, they do help her.
Yuri returns from his short trip to find Kilani has escaped. After killing the guards who let her escape, beating Nesryn within an inch of her life, and moving all his "product" to a secondary location, he burns his mansion down with Nesryn inside, hoping it would kill her. But it stops burning long before it reaches the cellar. Yuri leaves a small group of his more experienced men behind just in case Kilani returns, hoping to get her back.
Kilani returns with Tyler and his men, after a small skirmish with Yuri's men, they return home with Nesryn. Being the good people they are, (and males being extremely protective) they decide that Yuri can't continue with his business and they need to help the other victims be freed as well.
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So it's mostly a romance but i added some fun spicey spice with the taking down of a villian :) Message me if you're interested or have more questions.
Romance will be the genre of the day for this one. I haven't written any sexual encounters before but I'm fairly confident in my ability to do so. But it's definitely story over smut for me and i would appreciate it if we agree on that. If we don't vibe well as far as writing i will let you know and i hope you do the same if you aren't feeling it. Open communication is big for me as well as my writing partner being understanding. I will show you the same courtesy of course :) I can't give a specific time schedule as far as writing since i have three kids and one is a nine month old who just started walking so my days can be very busy at times.
I write between two to six paragraphs, just kind of depending on the scene and my writing partner. I would like at least two paragraphs at minimum, however for the sexual parts one paragraph will do just fine. I ask that those intimate scenes are classy and not trashy please. Good grammar is a big plus but typos are expected as everyone has them.
Oh, a really huge thing for me is I need someone who can write side characters with almost as much, if not exactly as much, depth as your main character.I think that's about it as far as what i'm looking for. I'm okay with discussing plot changes usually but i will have to ask that the main plot line stays the way it is but that doesn't mean i'm not open to suggestions if you have any. One other thing, this story line consists of two main girl characters so i will be looking for you to write two main guy characters. The two guys are best friends who jointly own a ranch where they live with a few other buddies, all of whom were part of the same special forces group. I gave them names(Tyler and Kaden) for the sake of making this easier but you can obviously change them if you want. I am looking for certain personality traits in Tyler and Kaden but it's not a whole bunch.
Tyler handled the combat better than most and while he can be pretty serious a lot, he doesn't mind goofing off with the guys or showing his feelings for his girl around other people. He's more of an alpha type but doesn't mind letting his woman lead the way, since he has full confidence in her abilities, as long as he can be right next to her to keep her safe.
Kaden handled the combat okay but he internalizes most of it and doesn't talk about what happened. A lot of people are intimidated by his presence because he's a lot stronger than he shows. He's not as good with his feelings as Tyler is but will make damn sure everyone knows that she is his. He is calloused a lot but has a soft spot for his girl. At first he seems a bit cold towards her but it's only because she scares him in a way. He doesn't believe in soul mates but something about her just makes him come undone. He has more of a Beta personality but it's simply because he's okay with not being totally in charge and he wont take shit from someone just because they're higher ranked than him.
Let me just introduce all the characters that will be important to this plot run-down:
Kilani: Older sister, Tyler's soul mate
Nesryn: Younger sister, Kaden's soul mate
Yuri: Antagonist, unhealthy obsession with Kilani, boss of an underground sex ring where the rich and powerful clientele has a penchant for torture, rape, and sometimes murder
(This is a werewolf thing. The kind that can change into full wolves and full humans)
Onto the plot information! I'm just going to give you a quick run down and if you wish to further delve into the story with me then we can discuss everything else.
When Nesryn goes on a road trip with a group of her friends, she catches a scent too intoxicating to ignore. Promising to meet up with them later, she separates and begins to track the person the scent belongs to. As she turns a corner, she sees a small group of men exiting the feed store across the road and she immediately is drawn to Kaden. Before she can cross the road to find out what was so interesting about him, Yuri grabs her from behind and drags her back into an alleyway, covering her mouth with a rag to muffle any screams. Taking her back to his mansion several hours away, he chains her to the cold, wet stone floor of a cell beneath his house and strips her of her clothing to make her suffer. It takes almost five years of being raped, starved, beaten, and tortured before she is rescued.
After Nesryn doesnt call or return to her friends, they call Kilani and inform her shes missing. Dropping everything, Kilani seeks the help of her Uncle and they look for three years before he finally stops to return back to the pack. Kilani continues the search for another year before she finally gets a solid lead that puts her right in Yuri's path. One night after Kilani leaves a small run down cafe in the outskirts of a small town close to Yuri's home, she's grabbed by three men and thrown into a van where they hit her over the head to knock her out.
When she regains consciousness, Kilani is shocked to see who she thought was an old family friend. Yuri Savage. After Kilani had refused his advances over the many years, he had decided to take a much more drastic approach. Kilani is trapped there for six months, every day getting raped and sometimes beaten because she wouldn't comply until he threatened to further cause Nesryn more harm.
Almost a full six months after he captured her, Kilani is allowed a couple hours of freedom a day outside as long as she has several men watching her. Preparing herself she saves all the strength she can and even allows Yuri to do as he pleases for a couple of days so she will be healed enough to escape. Once she sees her chance, she escapes, having realized that as long as she can go get help, Nesryn has an actual chance.
Unknowingly, Kilani passes onto Tyler and Kaden's land after traveling a full day and finds a safe place in the nearby woods to hole up for a few hours. She doesnt even get to sleep when she hears the sound of two men voices and immediately bolts, fear making her think it's Yuri or his men. But in her weakened state she doesn't get far before Tyler's men catch up to her. As they try to calm her down, Kilani goes on the offensive and gets in a couple good hits before they subdue her and she stops struggling from exhaustion. She passes out asleep in the truck on the way back to the house.
Upon arriving at Tyler's house they take her inside and Tyler finds out shes his soul mate. Once she wakes up almost a full two days later, Kilani gets her bearings and is relieved to find she's in a safe place but wont calm down because of Nesryn's predicament. Asking for their help, they do help her.
Yuri returns from his short trip to find Kilani has escaped. After killing the guards who let her escape, beating Nesryn within an inch of her life, and moving all his "product" to a secondary location, he burns his mansion down with Nesryn inside, hoping it would kill her. But it stops burning long before it reaches the cellar. Yuri leaves a small group of his more experienced men behind just in case Kilani returns, hoping to get her back.
Kilani returns with Tyler and his men, after a small skirmish with Yuri's men, they return home with Nesryn. Being the good people they are, (and males being extremely protective) they decide that Yuri can't continue with his business and they need to help the other victims be freed as well.
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So it's mostly a romance but i added some fun spicey spice with the taking down of a villian :) Message me if you're interested or have more questions.
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