So since I can't finish the book why not try the next best thing, I have the main characters up in characters forum so you can go have a look and choose , we can also discuss I'm negotiable .http://writerssanctum.com/threads/i...nja-vs-samurai-the-love-plot-characters.1666/
So the story line will be about two female ninjas being pursued by two male samurais during a mission and later a war, the officers are hot on their trail, during a series of events one of them finds out that one of the ninjas is infact their sister (Jade sister to Kurell)
During the war the 4 became close (( I'm still working with this and I need your ideas BTW))
FTB
No Abusive language
But a brief history and some details are below to activate your creative juices
Ninja school: Gruro
Ninja school location: hidden inside a large mountain
Leader: Nordall Kukato
Clan: Nordalls
Classes of Ninja: Regels, Kaders, Artz
Slogan of school: Order Of Action
REGELS: The ninjas who are trained to become assassins, very highly skilled fighting techniques
KADERS: The ninjas who are trained to give assistance, also trained in the basic medicines, intermediate fighting techniques but highly skilled with technology and diffusing or activating bombs.
ARTZ: ninjas who are highly trained in medicine and healing techniques, with basic fighting techniques
When ninjas are fully enrolled and graduated they form a 3 squad team with each class of ninjas: regels, kaders and artz, the pugnator is the leader of the group which generally falls to the ninja who is the Regel, and the team is given a code name.
The characters code name and information are in characters
School layout;
Hall grounds; massive room for school gatherings
Master grounds; large pavilion on lowest level
Training Yuv; medium room for sparring or matchups
Hover center; room where Regime members discuss
Crystal Chambers; offices and chambers for the Nordall Regime members
Bath lounge; Bathing facilities for students
Tech Study; room with computers and advanced weapon technology
Library; room with books and sitting area
Student rooms; room for students to sleep
Mass Chambers; bigger rooms for adult students
garden; space with benches and plants where some students eat
Brief History
Dytec was originally a German organization who created advanced weapon technology, there main attracted buyers were mostly mercenaries and Ninja institutions.
Alois Fischer was the CEO of Dytec, and he partnered with one of his biggest clients who owned a Ninja institution called LuSai Band, it was located inside four combined mountains of the Badlands, the walls are impenetrable and the area leading up to it is highly secured.
Lusai Band originally were a small clan who were trained at Jing Wu Men in china and also possessed exceptional Tan Tui skills they all combined in the 1900s and started the Lusai clan, all were Chinese but when they realized that reproducing within themselves made their numbers decline, they seeked desperate measures to insure their skills lived on amongst them.
They adopted children and in severe cases kidnapped babies from orphanages outside of Japan and trained them the skills of Jing Wu Men and Tai Tui. After years of hiding in the mountains of Shikoku island they became discovered by the government of Japan, and nearby governments, some governments eventually paid them to assassinate politicians, leaders and even other ninjas from other organizations and they started the business of becoming mercenaries. But when the following Japanese government joined with the Kazan Genji clan samurais were released to give order from the ninjas and everything between the two worlds became complexed, Samurais were highly trained officers with unmatched sword skills who were of noble blood and always followed their code of ethics called the bushido.
Over decades the Lusai Band adopted and kidnapped children from the western world having now mixed races in their clan. Dytec supplied their weapons for free since 1995 deliberations, they now supply weapons to the school for free in exchange for their assassination services, being a business of weapons they came across many clients who preferred to hire someone to execute their targets and joining with the ninja clan would make a more lucrative business, Lusai Band agreed for the German company to join in the ninja schooling and the school changed to Gruro the owner of Dytec then made his son trained as a ninja and when he grew up he took over and changed the Lusai Band to the Nordalls and introduced more mixed races into the organization
Samurais code of ethics: only face to face combat
:Use of only blade weapons
Ninja's laws for samurais: Must disembark if pursued by a samurai
:If caught by a Samurai, suicide becomes the ALTERNATE mission
So the story line will be about two female ninjas being pursued by two male samurais during a mission and later a war, the officers are hot on their trail, during a series of events one of them finds out that one of the ninjas is infact their sister (Jade sister to Kurell)
During the war the 4 became close (( I'm still working with this and I need your ideas BTW))
FTB
No Abusive language
But a brief history and some details are below to activate your creative juices
Ninja school: Gruro
Ninja school location: hidden inside a large mountain
Leader: Nordall Kukato
Clan: Nordalls
Classes of Ninja: Regels, Kaders, Artz
Slogan of school: Order Of Action
REGELS: The ninjas who are trained to become assassins, very highly skilled fighting techniques
KADERS: The ninjas who are trained to give assistance, also trained in the basic medicines, intermediate fighting techniques but highly skilled with technology and diffusing or activating bombs.
ARTZ: ninjas who are highly trained in medicine and healing techniques, with basic fighting techniques
When ninjas are fully enrolled and graduated they form a 3 squad team with each class of ninjas: regels, kaders and artz, the pugnator is the leader of the group which generally falls to the ninja who is the Regel, and the team is given a code name.
The characters code name and information are in characters
School layout;
Hall grounds; massive room for school gatherings
Master grounds; large pavilion on lowest level
Training Yuv; medium room for sparring or matchups
Hover center; room where Regime members discuss
Crystal Chambers; offices and chambers for the Nordall Regime members
Bath lounge; Bathing facilities for students
Tech Study; room with computers and advanced weapon technology
Library; room with books and sitting area
Student rooms; room for students to sleep
Mass Chambers; bigger rooms for adult students
garden; space with benches and plants where some students eat
Brief History
Dytec was originally a German organization who created advanced weapon technology, there main attracted buyers were mostly mercenaries and Ninja institutions.
Alois Fischer was the CEO of Dytec, and he partnered with one of his biggest clients who owned a Ninja institution called LuSai Band, it was located inside four combined mountains of the Badlands, the walls are impenetrable and the area leading up to it is highly secured.
Lusai Band originally were a small clan who were trained at Jing Wu Men in china and also possessed exceptional Tan Tui skills they all combined in the 1900s and started the Lusai clan, all were Chinese but when they realized that reproducing within themselves made their numbers decline, they seeked desperate measures to insure their skills lived on amongst them.
They adopted children and in severe cases kidnapped babies from orphanages outside of Japan and trained them the skills of Jing Wu Men and Tai Tui. After years of hiding in the mountains of Shikoku island they became discovered by the government of Japan, and nearby governments, some governments eventually paid them to assassinate politicians, leaders and even other ninjas from other organizations and they started the business of becoming mercenaries. But when the following Japanese government joined with the Kazan Genji clan samurais were released to give order from the ninjas and everything between the two worlds became complexed, Samurais were highly trained officers with unmatched sword skills who were of noble blood and always followed their code of ethics called the bushido.
Over decades the Lusai Band adopted and kidnapped children from the western world having now mixed races in their clan. Dytec supplied their weapons for free since 1995 deliberations, they now supply weapons to the school for free in exchange for their assassination services, being a business of weapons they came across many clients who preferred to hire someone to execute their targets and joining with the ninja clan would make a more lucrative business, Lusai Band agreed for the German company to join in the ninja schooling and the school changed to Gruro the owner of Dytec then made his son trained as a ninja and when he grew up he took over and changed the Lusai Band to the Nordalls and introduced more mixed races into the organization
Samurais code of ethics: only face to face combat
:Use of only blade weapons
Ninja's laws for samurais: Must disembark if pursued by a samurai
:If caught by a Samurai, suicide becomes the ALTERNATE mission