@ashtonthezora I'm gonna need just about everything about that character toned done.
It just doesn't suit the vibe of the role play.
Instead, Jay got stuffed full of enhanced reflexes and healing, inhuman strength, and the dexterity of a god. In fact, the only thing he isn't good at is expressing his emotions.
This, right off the bat is too much. Comparing anything to the level of a God is an instant warning light for me. Not to mention saying the only thing he can't do is express his emotions goes against what this role play should be about. It should be about team work, and a raft tag group of criminals just trying to get by, by covering each other's weaknesses. Your character won't fit in.
Jay was given a couple of cyber enhancements as well, including some eye implants that allow him to research, record, and see more than the eye can see, if you know what he means... Like, thermal, x-ray, and in the dark. His long ears actually have small radio transmitters that can pick up signals and he wears an earring that allows him to adjust/search for frequencies. His other jewelry is also fancy tech too, like armor, weapons, and the like. His fingers have nano-sensors in them that are very delicate and sensitive, and can connect to the receptors in his eyes that allow him to see through things and even into the ground. Or people. Jay also received heaps of internal sensors, comms, and other basic tech.
Nope. Too much tech, given how much his attributes are enhanced. Lose the cyber eyes, finger sensors, and ear receivers.
It is the near future, cybernetics aren't perfect. I expect a more comprehensive list of what you consider basic tech when I get around to making a character sheet.
Magic is where he really excels, though. Jay was gifted with the manipulation of reality, to a degree, and can create illusions, or even warp space and time. Nothing world ending, just a little bit of teleportation, telekinesis, and the ability to make people see things that aren't there. Mental magic is also a forte of his, and he can go into the psyche of others and pull out their worries and fears, or make them feel so at ease that he could be their best friend in an instant. Of course, magic is a muscle and new developments are always an unexpected surprise...
All I can really say is no. Just no. If he didn't have the cybernetics and other enhancements, I might have considered someone with that much magical ability, but no. With that many cybernetics and other enhancements, that much magic makes your character too overpowered to be considered playable in this role play.
This doesn't even take into account where he got it all from. A pretty major driving force behind the characters should be debt. The mega corporations own everything. Everything has a cost.
I do appreciate your effort, but you seemed to have missed the point.
Just because Biotics, Cybernetics and Magic exist, doesn't mean everyone has all three. So, I'm not expecting huge amounts on all three. You should pick a focus, and try and leave the others to flavour text instead of to further buff your character.
