MxF Short and Sweet {Multi-Para, Detail heavy}

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MxF Short and Sweet {Multi-Para, Detail heavy}

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**OPEN**

Welcome

I've been writing for over ten years. I won't bore you with fluff, I'll just lay out who I am as a writer and what I'm looking for in a partner.

People often say quality over quantity, but I'm quite greedy, so why not both? I go for quantity and quality. I write 3-10 paragraphs per post depending on the scene. I go heavy on detail, I love character development, and definitely moving the plot forward. I will only write with people who have a similar writing style to myself, I don't intend to start countless stories here. I am looking for one or two solid partners to write with and thats all, so if we don't seem to work well together it's a no go. I respect people that give me the same effort I give them, so if you're unable to write multiple paragraphs with heavy detail don't contact me. I don't want to put pressure on anyone to write out of their comfort zone, so if you're not experienced writing in this way we probably won't work out. Also, I will move the story forward but I won't carry it, it's our story once we start, not mine alone. So let's get creative.

I work full time in a very taxing job so I am only able to post 1-2 times a week. It's not frequent but I will be sure to make it worth the wait.

I have a handful of ideas in mind, just shallow plots that I would like to expand on with a partner. I am also open to hearing your ideas. I lean towards action/adventure. No laid back slice of life themes. What is a story without indulging in some carnal desires? Sex is guaranteed in all the stories, even if it's a slow burn.
I write all 18+ themes, sex, drugs, violence, blood, ect... You've been warned.

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*ALSO, PLEASE SEND ME A WRITING SAMPLE. I HAVE BEEN GETTING TOO MANY RESPONSES FROM PEOPLE WHO ONLY WRITE ONE LINERS AND UNFORTUNATELY THAT IS NOT WHAT I'M LOOKING FOR.*


Vibrant oranges and pinks swirled together on the horizon, the cloudless sky made for a beautiful sunset. In the nearby town though, no one admired its beauty. Sunset gave warning to them to get inside, board their windows, and pray to whatever gods would listen. A winding dirt road led from the nearby town into a dark forest. According to locals a specific demon had claimed the area as its territory and snatched up a human every night. The stories of the creature were told in the local tavern, spoken in hushed voices as if just speaking of the demon would cause it to appear. The tavern was where he'd heard of the monster, and now he was set out to kill it. The dirt path tilted and shifted, the loose earth under his feet causing him to stumble slightly. Perhaps he'd had one to many pints of ale. A smile pulled across Cyrus' lips as he pressed forward towards the menacing forest. Could it be that tonight was the night he would see Valhalla? He wasn't much of a warrior anymore but he had fought plenty of times in his life, so perhaps he would still be welcome there when he died.

Cyrus had very little regard for his life, some said it seemed like he wanted to die, but that wasn't exactly the case. He would welcome death if it came, but he would not die a coward. He would fight and if he won he would live, if he lost he would die, he resigned himself to that. Sure, he wasn't doing himself any favours by leaving to hunt a demon right at nightfall, with four pints of ale in his stomach and nothing else. Maybe he truly did have a death wish... Even he wasn't sure anymore.

Cyrus approached the tree line. He was clad in all black, black breeches tucked into dark leather boots. He had on a white tunic that tucked into his waistband. Covering that was a black overcoat that was fastened closed with leather straps. Thick, brown leather armour made up the outermost layer, covering his chest, abdomen, back, and shoulders. Each piece was studded with iron bolts for reinforcement. He wore dark leather gloves that were tucked into the leather bracers that covered his forearms. He looked less like a hunter and more like a mercenary, a transition that had happened naturally over time. His longsword was strapped to his back, peeking over his right shoulder where he could easily draw it, carrying it unlike a regular solider. Around his waistband were different pouches and tools. Tucked into the side of one of his boots was a dagger, used in emergencies. His dark hair was pushed back out of his face, tied into a tight knot so it was out of the way.

He didn't hesitate to follow the road into the forest, the canopy of branches blocking out what little light the sunset provided. He was told the demon had a lure, it looked like a woman, and when men would approach her the demon would strike, dragging the victim away somewhere in the forest. If it had no luck catching prey in the forest it would move on to the town and take someone. The shadows engulfed his form as he pressed farther into the trees, eyes tracing over the edges of the path, searching for signs of the demon. Other than the lure, he had no description. He didn't know if it could fly, if it burrowed, if it was large, or small. He wasn't sure what to expect, but learning on his feet was something he'd mastered long ago. As he moved he noticed some spots where the dirt was disturbed, the grass was flattened, and the nearby bushes had some broken branches. It looked like something was dragged off the path, in more than a few places... he was getting close.

As that thought crossed his mind a noise caught his ears. Cyrus' head turned quickly, eyes finding a pale figure in the darkened forest. A couple meters into the bushes stood a woman, face buried in her hands as if she was crying. She was fully nude, from what he could see, her fair skin almost seeming to glow in the shadows. Her dark hair fell over her shoulders like water flowing over stone. His head stayed facing the woman but his eyes were moving over the trees. The demon was hiding somewhere, though he couldn't see where. Soft sobbing met his ears and his eyes once again found the woman. "Not bad" He commented in a low voice. She looked like a real woman, it was no wonder men were being swept away so easily. A thought crossed his mind and a smirk pulled at the edge of his lips, causing a dimple to crease his left cheek. If the demon wouldn't show itself, then he'd just have to go find it. With that, he turned, moving towards the woman. He only made it about five steps before something wrapped around his ankle like a snare. It tightened before abruptly pulling. A grunt left his lips as he fell back, hitting the ground with force. He didn't have a second to think though, as fast as he was pulled off his feet he was being dragged through the forest. He lifted his arms to protect his face from the branches as he was dragged. The trees flew past him rapidly, he could feel branches and rocks scrapping at the parts of his body not protected by armour. Maybe this wasn't his best idea… but he was committed now, whether he wanted to be or not.

The sight of forest flying past him abruptly changed to dirt as he was dragged into a large den, a dirt tunnel the demon had burrowed into the earth. He'd barely seen the entrance before everything around him was pitch black. "Ah, shit" He cursed as his leg was released, the thing disappearing into the dark where he couldn't see. He inhaled through his teeth, a slight hiss sound forming as he took inventory of what hurt. His clothes were ripped in places, he definitely had a couple scrapes but nothing serious. He sat up, pushing off the ground with his hand to stand in the dark cavern. He couldn't see a thing, but he could feel it. The air was shifting around him, it was in there with him and it was getting closer. He lifted a hand, reaching over his shoulder for the hilt of his sword but his hand only found air. Shit-

A force struck him, knocking him off his feet once more. He slid across the dirt floor for a couple meters before slowing to a stop. His sword must have come loose when he was being dragged, just great. He coughed, trying to regain the air that had been knocked out of him. "Oh man, it really is a shame I can't see your ugly face-" He began to speak as he got to his feet once more. The air was moving around him again. "-If you're as foul looking as you smell I'm sure I'd die just from seeing you" The air shifted, Cyrus ducked down, reaching for his boot as something whipped over his head. He drew his dagger, feeling the shape coming close once more. He angled his blade and without hesitation he sunk it into the heavy shape that had knocked him off his feet moments ago. A blood curdling screech erupted from the demon as warm blood rushed over his blade and over his gloved hands. It pulled back and the cavern trembled, the creature thrashing about. All his blades were laced with poison, a simple dagger could inflict excruciating pain to any creature it pierced. Cyrus reached into one of the pouches tied to his belt, wrapping his fingers around two small orbs. He pulled them free before flinging them forward, watching as they exploded against the ground. Bright red light burned from the orbs, giving him his first look at the creature he was fighting. It was massive, larger than a two story building and shaped like a centipede of sorts. Its body was covered in scales, two long trails of spiked legs lined either side of its elongated torso. It's face consisted of black eyes and a mouth full of fanged teeth. From its forehead swung a long, thin tentacle type extremity. That was likely what had dragged him from the road. Countless human and animal bones were scattered throughout the cavern, revealing just how much killing the creature had already done.

Despite seeing the horror he was facing, a smile pulled across Cyrus' lips. "There you are beautiful" His eyes were focused, pupils dilated, smirk never leaving his lips as the flares began to fade. There wasn't anything that made him feel more alive than fighting a demon, the rush was something he constantly chased. The light dulled, the demon moved, lunging towards him. Cyrus side stepped just as the light disappeared, allowing his blade to find the creature's flesh once more.

The blade made contact, sliding through the creatures flesh like butter as it moved. The noise it released would be enough to make any man's blood run cold but all Cyrus could hear was his own pounding heart. Maybe fighting in the dark wasn't the best strategy, neither was hunting while horribly drunk, but there he was. The creature twisted and his blade jerked free. Before he had time to sense it coming he was struck, harder this time. A peircing pain shot through his stomach as he was thrown back, colliding with the side of the cavern. Small flickering lights danced in front of his eyes as he fell to the ground, catching himself on his hands and knees. He coughed, tasting that familiar iron taste filling his mouth. Searing pain was burning through his entire right side, it was too dark to see where exactly he was hurt but he could feel warmth soaking through the linen tunic he wore under his armour. Something had pierced through the leather, probably one of its spiked legs. A wave of nausea washed over him. He'd been hurt before, but with nothing in him but days worth of ale he wasn't at his strongest. He lifted a hand from the ground, bracing it against his bleeding abdomen, feeling the warm fluid flowing between his fingers. "Shit" He coughed. He could feel how much blood he was losing, and he could hear the demon coming towards him again. He clenched his teeth and forced himself to his feet, swaying as he clutched his side in one hand and his dagger in the other. If he was going to die he was taking this thing down with him. He'd stabbed it twice already, Veturia poison was strong, even for something so large it wouldn't last much longer. With a groan he managed to move, barely side stepping out of the path of its attack. He stumbled but the short blade managed to sink into the beast once more. A grunt left his lips as he pushed it deeper, knowing this was his last chance to kill the damn thing. It screeched out and pulled away, disappearing into the darkness but he could still hear its horrid noises. It thrashed it's massive body back, causing the den to tremble around them. It was trying to fight the effects of the poison, but it was too late. The thrashing began to slow before stopping completely. Cyrus breathed heavily, still clutching his side.

Blood dripped from between his fingers as he fought off the waves of dizziness that washed over him. He didn't dare try bending down to return his dagger to the sheath inside his boot. If he fell over now he wasn't getting back up, he knew that… so instead he turned, forcing his feet to move. "I'm not dying in this shit hole" He muttered as he moved towards the faint glow of the entrance. The walk to the entrance might as well have been a mountain climb with how heavily he was breathing. It was like walking through mud, his feet felt heavier with every step. Slowly, he emerged from the den, the faint moonlight illuminating the grassy field between the entrance and the nearby tree line. A shine caught his eye and he looked down, seeing his sword laying in the grass. "Oh, there you are" He breathed out as he swayed, the dagger falling from his hand. Cyrus dropped to his knees, feeling the earth collide with body as he fell forward, laying on the ground next to his sword.

He was a bloody mess. The leather armour that had protected the front right of his abdomen had been sliced open. The tunic under that was also torn, as was his skin. The wound was substantial, reaching from just above his hip diagonally up to his mid abdomen, just below where his ribcage started. Cyrus' eyes stared blankly at the hilt of his sword, the image of that same hilt sticking out of his hunting partner's chest flashing through his mind. A bitter smile pulled at his now bloodied lips, what a thing to remember right before dying. Darkness began to creep into his vision, the lull of unconsciousness tempting him, and for the first time in his life he allowed himself give in to its temptation. He was tired… Darkness completely filled his vision as his eyes fell shut, the pain fading as the rhythmic pounding of his heart left his ears, leaving him numb, and silent.
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I am also open minded to hearing your ideas

If I sound like your type, shoot me a message, I'm more friendly than I seem here, I promise.

Cheers​
 
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Hi there! I am new to this site, just joined today, actually. You definitely sound like someone I would love to have as a writing partner here. I'm still figuring out how this site works so I'm not exactly sure on how to go about things. I will attach a writing example of mine down below! Let me know if my writing style interests you!

Keep in mind, this excerpt is from a few years ago and my reply length as well as quality has greatly increased since then, I simply do not have other examples at the moment.
Autumn. It was Katherine's favorite time of year. She loved how the leaves changed color, falling soundlessly to the ground as autumn dwindled away and winter took its place. Splotches of red and brown littered the ground, painting the earth a bright Amber. She had always viewed autumn as the time when all the leftover color of the year was thrown out and used up before a white blanket of snow took over, becoming a new blank canvas for the world to paint.

Katherine had always hated winter. It was far too cold for her liking. Far too cold and far too lonely, but there was a certain beauty to winter. The peaceful fall of snow and the silence that came in the absence of cars driving on the roads. Katherine couldn't deny that there was a certain pull she felt to winter. A certain magnetism she felt to the world seeming to start over... To come to a complete standstill.

It was early in the morning, the sun had yet to rise and Katherine had been driving for hours. She had planned on taking a road trip by herself for self reflection but now as she drove home after her road trip was over she felt a little unnerved being alone.

Katherine was currently passing through a long winding road, riddled with dark shadows cast by the trees standing in the moons glow. It had an unsettling beauty to it, but this beauty soon morphed into panic when she heard the coughing of her car engine.

"No no no, don't you dare do this. Not here, not now!" Katherine hissed, curses barely audible as they passed her lips. She kept her foot on the gas, but she knew her car's demise was something she couldn't change. It only took a few short moments, her car engine giving a few stuttered hiccups, before the engine stopped completely. "Fuck..." She sighed heavily, forehead falling against the steering wheel in defeat.

Her fingers tapped against the steering wheel as she thought of what to do but her thoughts were soon interupted when she heard a knock on her car window. "Hello? Katherine?" A tall blonde called, a small smile playing at her lips.

"Jessica? Oh my God, I'm so glad you're here" Katherine laughed, immediately unbuckling and opening her car door as she leapt out to envelope the blonde in a hug. "You are so lucky I was coming home from my boyfriend's house, Kat. Need a ride home?" Jessica asked.

"Geez, Jess. You really are a lifesaver. I really don't know what I would do without you." Katherine gushed as she gave her friend Jessica a small squeeze hug. The two girls gathered any important items Katherine might need from her car before they moved to Jessica's car and prepared for the hour long drive home.

Katherine tried to stay awake for the long drive back but as her eyes fluttered closed she couldn't help but drift, black taking over.

It was only an hour later before she disturbed from her slumber, sunlight pouring into the car windows as Jessica smiled over at her. "Good morning sleeping beauty." She teased, smile playing at her pink lips. "Morning" Katherine hummed in response as she looked around. She could easily tell they were pulling up to the apartment complex and with a small stretch she sat up, the car slowing and clicking as Jessica put it into park.

"Thank you again so much. You really are a lifesaver, Jess" Katherine laughed, leaning over to hug her best friend before she climbed out of the car. "Hey! Your car is being towed to the parking garage about ten minutes out. It'll be ready for pickup tomorrow!" Jessica called before she put the car into reverse and backed out.

It was only a few seconds before a high pitched squeal could be heard, a small five year old girl racing over and hugging Katherine's legs. "Kat! Kat! Hi Kat!" The girl squealed in delight, laughing when Katherine picked her up and lifted her into her arms. "Awww hi Lucy! How are you?" Katherine gushed. She knew this was the landlords daughter, meaning the landlord was probably up setting the final papers for for someone to move into an apartment and she guessed it must be the empty apartment right across from hers.

"Mama's just around the corner! She's helping someone move in!" The small child giggled. "Oh is she now? I must have a new neighbor then" Katherine hummed, turning the corner only to spot Lucy's mother, the landlord, and a stranger to her speaking outside one of the rooms near Katherine's.
 
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