Both Needed The Blue Moon Diner

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Both Needed The Blue Moon Diner

Once Ash is up I'll read em' both and start working on mine. Catch ya later.
 
Square One said:
Hm... Depending on how J's parents feel about Sophie, maybe he flirts with her because he knows she's into him and his parents disapprove. That uncertainty could also play into the roleplay, either making him an eventual target for Sophie or making an ally to help him get out alive.
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Sounds good! Sorry guys for the wait, I'll get started on my reply!
 
Bruce is done, Ingird will pop up in my next and Bruce is a bit short but I an't feelin' so great. I'm gonna rest a bit.
 
I'll get to it when I can. Kinda stressed because my parents changed the plans at the last minute on me, so I dunno when I'll be back.
 
JEEZE GUYS. Amazing posts so far... I'm floored. What the f#@k?!? I'm at work right now or I'd be even more effusive. So SO well written, and I am falling for your characters hard.

@Square One you know there's no rush :) life happens. I'm excited to read your intro though!!!
 
KateLocked said:
JEEZE GUYS. Amazing posts so far... I'm floored. What the f#@k?!? I'm at work right now or I'd be even more effusive. So SO well written, and I am falling for your characters hard.

@Square One you know there's no rush :) life happens. I'm excited to read your intro though!!!
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Kate, you should know by now flattery will get you no (every) where with me.
 
@Square One love the way your narration is really getting into each character's head. That's a great style.

I'm gonna take notes on all your characters now and write a new post. :)
 
I like to write first person best of all, but that doesn't really work here, so I just did pseudo-first person. XD Also, writing Jedidiah any other way wouldn't have been nearly as fun. He's definitely going to be the comic relief character. That's gonna be nuts, though, if he ends up being the killer. He's crazy enough! XD
 
@Square One his gun trap killed a guy! Jedidiah is a funny character, but that was pretty terrifying to think about. I love it. Enjoying the way a lot of these characters have already revealed very dark things going on in their lives.
 
@KateLocked That's true! It wasn't intentional, but I wanted him to be unhinged in a way that still shows some menace, just in case he does need to kill to defend himself (or cleanse the cafe of Their takeover. They'll never catch him alive!)

J would be a little harder to have as the werewolf, but it would be doable. I have an idea that I'll pull out after the werewolf is introduced, and then that way, it makes it easier in-character to suspect him, but also harder in meta to tell if he's actually guilty or not. Maybe we have the weird twist where Jed tries to play judge, jury, and executioner, and I end up with one character killing the other. XD
 
Edited my first post, it's now in my default posting style. Meant to do it like that the first time but didn't will be posting like that from now on. Working on my next one now.
 
@Square One completely understood. This month is probably crazy for everybody. Don't worry about it :)

@Vaughn Doom if no one is opposed, you're totally welcome to join! It's too late to be a character who is potentially the killer (I already determined that) but you could play key characters who are at the diner who contribute to the story OR this patrolman character tasked with keeping everyone safe (J's dad, at this point) OR both!
 
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